Feedback on Attempt Final Video.

Ellie and myself posted our final cut of our firework music video. After filming both performance and narrative shots Ellie cut and edited the shots leaving the most intimative scenes that we felt audiences would identify and connect with , aswell as trying to create a music video that would use conventions of a female pop artist , most specifically katy perry. When we felt we had created this we posted the video on social networking site , on our media production page we had created on the website in order to gain feedback from the general public as a way of crowd-sourcing. one useful piece of feedback we gained was that the transactions between different shots were too slow and as result the music video did not look in sync , in comparison to any other music video including katy Perry's firework video which changes from shot to shot very quickly and seamlessly. in order to alter this Ellie and myself looked at Katy's videos such as firework and teenage dream and timed at quickly she changed from one shot to another. Her match on actions transactions between shots prompted us to make our shots have a quicker pace of change.